Monday, 2 July 2018

Michael Joseph Savage

My personal hero
I am showing the work I have learnt about a New Zealander who changed New Zealand.
I enjoyed finding out about my hero and what he did.
The thing I found hard was finding information that would interest my viewers.
The thing I will do next time is add more information for my readers to read.

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3 comments:

  1. Anonymous24 July 2018 at 12:50

    Kia Ora my name is Tyhler i go to Te Hapara school i liked how you described that you wanted to step out of your comfort zone and i liked that you said you live in Australia because i love Auzzi the best places to go there are the water park and the awesome arcade time zone well i like your blog and thank you for shearing and have a nice day

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  2. Shantay2 August 2018 at 14:02

    Kia ora, I am shantay from Riverdale School.
    I really liked how you did a piece of writing of the person you like.
    I learnt that your personal hero is michael joseph savage
    Maybe you could ad more writing
    If you would like to see my learning visit my blog http://riverdalegisshantayk.blogspot.com/
    Mā te wā
    shantay

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    1. Jorja13 August 2018 at 13:40

      Hi Shantay
      Thank you for the wonderful comment.
      I will add a bit more informatoin next time.
      Mā te wā
      Jorja

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